Ren

[rain]

Name: Ren helor
Age/Birthday: 10 7-15
Gender: male
God Parent: Asclepius
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family:Carol Helor
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History:Ren always loved herbs. He always grew them with his grandmom. One day he was planting some herbs with her. Then, a snake appaered. But it wasn't a snake i was a Draconae. His grandmom killed it with a swipe of her shovel. The shovel was made of celestial bronze. She told him everything. His grandmom new because her daughter told her. he has been at camp ever since. His dad claimed him due to the fact that he wanted his son to be happy. He thought that if he knew who his dad was he would be happy. A reath of medicine vines appeared on his head.
Physical Appearance:Ren's hair is dark. He has brown eyes. He keeps his hair short. His skin is a light tan.
Personality: Ren is easily annoyed. He likes to help people anyway. He loves to heal others. He hates to kill.
Fatal Flaw: Hesitation to kill.
Pets: He has two canaries that follow him
Talents: He can tell you if a plant is good bad or nuetral.
Weapons: He uses a poisoned knife.
Year-Round or Summer: year-round

[dreamshimmer]

its good but the history. it doesnt make sense.
As far as i know, draconaes are big. Plus they are demons and cant be killed with mortal weapons like a shovel. And why wouldnt the grandmother have him in camp half blood in the first place? And how did his grandma know?
Plus, if he has been claimed, you need to say how in your history.